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Linking words are useful when writing an argumentative essay. The argumentative essay follows a set pattern:
Grab the reader’s attention. Explain why the issue is important, your position and state what your essay will be about in your introduction.
The body includes arguments and evidence that supports your argument. Also present counter-arguments and why the opposing viewpoint is flawed or incomplete
Summarise the main arguments and main points. End with a thought-provoking statement, a suggestion for future action or consideration.
When introducing the reader to what your essay will be about, use words such as:
To begin with, First or Initially
When presenting your arguments, use words such as: On the one hand, Additionally or Furthermore
When presenting counter-arguments, use words such as: On the other hand, However or In contrast
When coming to a conclusion, use words such as: Therefore, In conclusion or To summarise
Example argumentative essay
Example argumentative essay
Title: Should high schools switch to a four-day school week?
Imagine having an extra day off every week – no classes, no homework, just time to relax. High schools should switch to a four-day school week because it can improve student mental health, reduce stress, and lead to better academic performance.
Feke's comment: Introduces what the essay is about (four day week)
A four-day school week can greatly improve student mental health. Studies show that students experience less stress and anxiety with a shorter school week, leading to better overall well-being. With more time to rest and recharge, students are likely to be more focused and productive during the four days of school.
Critics argue that a shorter week could reduce learning time and negatively impact academic achievement. However, with more concentrated class time and less burnout, students can learn better, even with one less day. Therefore, the benefits of a four-day week outweigh the concerns, making it a better option for students.
Feke's comment: One part is about health (stress, anxiety, well-being). The counter-argument is about learning (less time learning versus burnout).
In conclusion, a four-day school week can positively impact both student health and academic performance. It offers more rest, reduces stress, and doesn't harm learning outcomes. Happier students are better learners.
Feke's comment: Concludes two main points (health and performance) and has a strong ending (Happier students are better learners)
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